I had grown fond of Amara, Elizabeth's lady in waiting, admiring her strong will and ability to keep her head when everything around her was falling to pieces. more n to them since the story itself provided a satisfying read, but Hidden Will of the Dragon was completely riddled with them! I understand this falls partly on the editor, or lack of one if that's the case, but either way it should have been picked through and polished before publishing.Hidden Will picks up where Dandelions left off but doesn't flow along with the original story quite right. I had noticed some in the previous story but didn't pay much attentio. There were also far too many errors throughout this book for me to over look. The way the story was told had changed and by doing so, lost all appeal for me. The main characters from Dandelions in the Garden, had stopped evolving with the ending of that book and instead digressed into hollow players in this drawn out and lackluster novel. Unfortunately, I was barely two chapters in when I realized this novel would be nothing like the first and was greatly disappointed as I continued to read. So, naturally I was very much looking forward to reading the book's sequel, The Hidden Will of the Dragon. Review 1: I recently read Dandelions in the Garden by Charlie Courtland, and became an instant fan of her storytelling.
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